Wow, i really like this poem, a job well done. keep up the good work. look forward to reading more of your poems.
5/5
xx rachel xx

Great job. This poem is calm yet powerful, swaying the reader into a content happiness and hope for a good future, one where you'll keep your love.

The rhythem and ryhming sceme are unwavering and fluid, some thing I don't think I've done yet. Great job, in my opinoin this is a perfect poem and I can't think of a thing I would change.

Your buddy
~Purple~