Wowee-- This was beautiful! I've never written a Huitain before, but I think I might try and give it a go someday. I thought you did a really good job with this though. Loved the details and imagry. Well done! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

This is really good. I tried to write a huitain the other day, and although I finished it, I really need to clean it up. Yours is wonderful. The flow and the imagery was right on.