This was a really dark intense poem. Loved how you asked so many questions, kept the reader thinking. I also loved the ending, I thought it was really well done. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Okay, I did not feel that this was that great.. The flow was off, the descriptions were nothing special, and you had spelling mistakes.. Try and go over it and fix it up a little.. 3/5

Hmm, this was an alright poem. There was only a little sense of darkness. Not a lot, but it wasa good poem. Keep it up.