Nice poem...i liked it
Oxo Laura Marie

Hmm. this had a nice theme to it which I enjoyed.

I look at the knife and see a faint blood print and wonder is it human or animal

Great lines - really thought provoking. I liked the ending regarding being both dead but I feel it is left hanging a little. Would she be better....how?
Better off? More sad?
I think you could put something more into it but not sure what.
Good effort 4/5

Not a bad poem at all. Rather boring and the same stuff I have been reading about the past year but never the less a great poem! Keep up the great work. Suicide and cutting are nothing to joke about