TIFFANY YOUR AMAZING
I LOVE YOU WITH MY WHOLE HEART
AND ALWAYS WILL
BFFEEAEAEAEAEAEAEAEAEAEA
LOVE YOUR LOSER FACE FRIEND
NIKKI lol

Love your poem/song always brings tears to my eyes

Omg hun i can never get over how truly amazing that songs is!... sorry i wasnt at school i had the stomach flue all friggin weekend
love you tonz babe be at school tomorrow xoxo

This is an awsome poem!!
Keep up teh good work!
Thanks for letting me read this!
xoxo

Tiff of course ill help you write a song for music class it should be fun
hehe NEWYEARS TONIGHT waiting for you to come down lol love you tonz xoxox ox

Wow... the emotion is definitly strong in this poem.. or song.. whatever.. lol :D ... you express yourself really well.... the repeated stanza adds character to this poem and really adds great emphasis to your words... a very enjoyable read.. i loved it... and i LOVE this line " I need you to save me from myself, dear superman-if you're even here"

I absolutely loved this poem/song.Your a great writer.

This poem is a little better than the other one. Sorry but thats just my opinion. Anyway, the rhyming was not forced at all.

Please wipe away my shedded tears
And tell me you will always be here.

these lines sound so needy and desparate, just like the mood and tone of the whole poem

wonderful job!

Awesome poem.. i like it

Wow, you are a fantastic writer, i've started to write songs myself, this was just great. i cant wait to see it on a cd someday!

*dOnTbReAkMyHeArT

WOOW, GREAT POEM

such wonderful wors were put in few lines

thank you for this poem i enjoyed it

Wow!!!