Mm i liked it

your a great poet o.o

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mm i dont see anything wrong -.- sry i dont think io can make it any better /cry and yah 5/5

This is great and thx for the comment and yes it is true to a certain extent thought i tend to stretch the truth in my poems lol well thx again and good job:D

keenan

Incredibly well written, rhymeless bu flowing poem. I couldn't have thought of this poem, but it seems as if you have and you wrote it extremely well. Thanks for you support on my poems, and i'm glad that there are other writers who understand what it's like to be broken hearted. I will check out your other poems when i get some time on my hands. Enjoy, and please keep on writing poems like these, i enjoy them a ton!

5/5

Wow you use a captivating title And it captured a poets attention and Im surprise when I saw the lines and the contents of this poem greatly wrtten you really deserve to be the poet of the week

Great job

geneross

Great poem, i love how descriptive you are "on the lips of eyelashes" and that stuff about a tear, very nice work. it flows...i like it. xo~Crissy

Amazing... it flows and has beautiful wording. I love it

This poem was short yet so deep. i loved the way when you read this poem you wouldnt have to ponder so much you understood this endless pain some1 is going through...every syllable was read and i didnt even want to miss out on the next one!!1kepp it up

This was a short poem~ but you put so much emotion into it which made it great~!
Awsome job! 5/5

Short, dark poem.
Full emotions.
Well done

Gr8 poem!!! Very well written, nice flow and gr8 word choice!!! I liked it alot!!! Keep up the good work!! =D