Comments : How Much do you love me?(conversation)

  • 17 years ago

    by Pepa

    WOW! lovely!!! i really liked it! i mean REALLY liked it lol! it was awesome! keep up the great work! GBU! Pepa

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, this was so sweeet! That was beautiful.. It was short and simple but very effective! The only thing I would change would be here:

    Like A new born baby relies on the mother
    ^ I would make it "loves it's mother" instead of "realies on the mother" but that's just my opinion..

    Nice job, I loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey i like the way uve written this piece., very well written xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Sorrow

    So very sweet...and i have to say it's very typical guys to do, being stupid and wait with the answer, and make the girl so insecure...very sweet, like it alot

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    AWWW;; SO SWEET! REALLY GOOD FLOW! NiCE JOB && KEEP iT UP!

    *GiRL iN LOVE♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww! So cute...I love it! :)
    Keep writing hun! I love you poems!

    Innoc3ntStar