Well Mr. John, Let me be the first to
congradulate you on you're spectacular
work. I have been commenting on a
lot of poems and let me tell you, that
your one of the best. Your work has
its own special style. Your able to get
your point across, tell a story, and
paint a picture perfectly, without
breaking the flow of your poem. Well
Mr. John, I have four words for you,
and I hope that you remember them.

Well Mr. John, Let me be the first to
congradulate you on you're spectacular
work. I have been commenting on a
lot of poems and let me tell you, that
your one of the best. Your work has
its own special style. Your able to get
your point across, tell a story, and
paint a picture perfectly, without
breaking the flow of your poem. Well
Mr. John, I have four words for you,
and I hope that you remember them.

Welcome to my favorites! lol....
Keep up the magnificent work your the
best.

Letty

This poem is incredibly moving!! I liked the message and i nearly cried!! (I probably would have done but my brother was in the room, and he would have lauged at me so much!)

O0o good points!!!! I totaly agree with you, it's really not necessary anymore (if it ever was at all)
Thanks for the comments!!
*CiaO* *5/5*

P.S. I would NEVER cut! Eww that's not me at all! yeah, I just entered contests and the motifs were saddness...I really am a very happy person! I do appreciate the concern! =]