Mel, this poem was really good, I liked the content very much, I saw a couple of small things you might want to correct,the second line if should be of and fourth line let should be set. It was a very well written poem, I would like you to rate and comment mine to see how you like them.

Very nice poem, quite well-knitted.good piece of poetry.
keep it up....

That was a nice poem!
and the flow was good as well...
keep it up!