I really like your poem because sometimes i feel that why to but yea i like your poem i vote it excellent

Good job, I loved the ending. You could still improve your flow and expand your vocab. Keep it up

Awesome. always great vocabs and rhymes.

Well laid out, very deep, full of emotion. A great piece

Awhh.. That was so sad yet very sweet. The emotion was clear and very strong, and the descriptions were great. They helped the reader to understand what had happened. There were a few places that contained repitition that I did not like, but that is just me. Nicely done hunny! 5/5

Excellent
5/5
it sent straight to my heart...
loved it
im sure u'll love my poem... murder or suicide..
it'll be nice if u vote & comment & i'll get back & comment more of ur poems

love
amy

I Never Stopped Loving You
OMG!! This poem is for almost everyone out there. I love how you go into detail and express your emotions ans how you feel! I loved it!

Yea i do live in L.A. i think burbank is close there, but i do live there. do u?

Sorry but I didn't like this. It was a list of emotions with little consideration of language or grammar.
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Beautiufl poem great job, keep it up :)

Sounded like a true story.Is it?Loved the story in it.Good job

I'm fine, sure it's ok if i can be ur big bro. yea, i have really posted a lot each day. TOO BORED. that's y! he he he he he, thankz for commenting

Nice job in this poem, very well written

Hey how do u start ur own thread. i mean for the discussions??? like how you did with that "wat do u wish for" or watever.........answer ASAP please!

Wait never mind, saw it!!!!! hehehehehe!

Hey can u be one of the ppl who'll comment and rate their poem for my new contest? like one of the judges?
thankz

I really loved it..its beautiful..it tells wat ppl go through when they see the one they love with someone else..its touching

I really enjoy your poems.

Excellent poem 5/5!!!!

Awww gurlie im soo sry this is happening to u!