Comments : Suicidal Moments

  • 17 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    5/5! comment on mine- Meg

  • 17 years ago

    by .x.HauNt.x.Me.x.

    Wow thats awesome!
    really well written and flowed great
    it reminds me of someone i know so much lol..

    keep it up 5/5

    please comment on my poem beautiful tragedy.. if you want to hehe.. xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, girl.. That was amazing and sooo sad.. I think you should have called it "I'm weak.. I'm weak" though.. But your decision, lol.. The flow in this was off but your powerful descriptions and emotion kind of made up for that.. Also, there were a few places where you were missing a word or two.. This can all be fixed by just reading over your work once you're finished.. Nice job though 5/5