Awe! This was sad. :[

Very nicely done though. I'm glad that you're trying out different styles, and most of them I've never even tried, so yesh. One day {Keyword: one day} I'll try them. tehe. You did a great job on this one hun. Loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Hmm, it was an ok poem. Awww Nelle, you are having a really bad writer's block. Haha, I guess we're in the same boat, but at least you are still writing something.

PS. I really think your smile is pretty :)

Awh, wow, that was excellent! I loved this onee.. The flow was good, the rhymes all worked really well, and the descriptions and emotion was wonderful! Great job, Ily. 5/5

Without you my heart is tore
You left me just like before!
I think that almost everyone can relate to this poem and I really enjoyed it! I LOVED IT!