Hmmm...I liked it. But the flow really threw me off. I thought it was too hard to read in some places, and easier in others. I also thought the word 'thee' was used too much lol. But that's up to you on how you choose the words. 4/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

U showed the importance of ur GOD, u showed how powerful how meaningful he is, not only for you, but for all of us. i liked it, actually i LOVED it

You use "thee" and "thy" and yet use "your" also. Kind of a clash in writing style there, IMO. I'd use one or the other consistently if I was you, and going by the pace of the poem, probably change "your" to "thy". Just a thought.

Here's to the artists, may they keep making something of something else till the end of time.
Matt

This is a great little poem.I really liked the flow and wording5

Awwh, I thought this one was really sweet.
Well thought out and well written, and the wording was, as always, fantastic.