I know what that feels like:(

Now u here u proved me that that's something from the deep depth of u r heart. nice!

I can really relate to this poem. It flowed well and the rhyming was good. There was a few grammatical errors but otherwise great use of language. It came straight from the heart and showed heaps of emotion. Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Ook i konda get it

Ook i konda get it

Same as before. the rhyming seems forced. but this poem has great potential. there are many ways u can alter it slightly to create a far better impact, for example adjusting the structure to give particular words more impact...

id love to help u as i really think u are talented but just need a little push in the right direction.

email me if u want a hand, this really could be very much better with the smallest of changes! :)

xx

I think this is one of ur best i love it!!!

I like this poem. You expressed heaps of emotions, and i can really relate to what you are saying. Great job. =]

I found this poem rather sad. Was it meant to be that way? If not it was and I loved it. Very nicely done.

I dont care about the capitalization,, most importand for are the message and i truly appreciate it. actually i can relate this poet and i know the feelings good job! very impressive and very enjoyable to read thanks for sharing

god bless yah!

Nice job. I think you can work on the flow. Your rhymes still sounds forced, you may want to work with free-style first. Keep it up

Thats a nice poem! heartfelt and all!

keep it up!