The poem was a bit shaky, flow wise, and I stumbled over a few words but the content of the poem was beautiful. How much I would like to meet one of my friends from a far. The rhymes were alright and I loved how you made it as if you were writing a letter to that online friend.

Lovely poem indeed... beautifully written and true from the heart. Good write. Keep up the great work! 5/5

A greatly written poem, I really enjoyed reading it, as we all can relate. Great job done, 5/5

Aww. This poem made me cry.. I know how that feels it hurts. alot. because you find ppl that you want to be with you so bad. but their somewhere else. I can kinda take this poem in to ways which I LOVE because it makes it mystereys with a hidin meaning.

How such a very good poets!!! i dont know what to say... hmmm its impressive..

Awhhh, that was soo sweeet! I loved it! It was amazinngg.. The flow was perfect and effortless.. The descriptions were beautiful and contained great imagery.. The emotion was clear.. Wonderful work! 5/5

Hey great poem!
its abit sad though, i not sure weather your friend died, or moved away.
good poem, your really talented
love mel

Wow, that was a great poem and I had no idea who was writing which verse, it flowed so well. I know there are a lot of cyber friends I would love to meet, but most of them live pretty far. Kristy, Chels.. we definitely have to meet someday.. someday soon.. lol

You rock man

Wow this is an amazing poem! i absolutely loved the ending
"Oh my friend how I wish you were here
Just know you are my shining star
Signed, sealed, and stamped
Your friend from afar "

that was awesome^^

awesoem write!

sophie:)

Awwww. I have always really wanted a twin sister, and I always complained when I was younger how I was SO unlucky to have a brother, but now I am older, and greatful. This was very nicely done. I love it.