Wow, I love it. Beautifully written. Full of emotion and it's deep. I can totally relate to it. Great job!! Keep up the good work!! 5/5 =]
Much Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

Love it!

I love this poem, the first line was perfect, it really got my attention.

Her eyes sparkle with unshed tears,

I think I can relate a little to your poem. Sometimes I would like to stop pretending I'm okay, but I know that wouldn't work. It would feel good though.

Nice poem. =)