This is a good piece.
It makes me more sad knowing whats happening around me right now.
5/5
keep it going
~Emah

I think this is one of the best pieces of writing i have ever read. I just loved it so much. You've got such an amazing gift. I've finally posted another poem, I havent had any time but I've finally got around to so if you have some spare time, check it out. Take care xoxo

Hey gorgeous, thnx 4 da comment. da reason i haven't commented on ur work recently is cos u've written ur recent work when I'm there which means I get 2 tell u in person my opinions. I tly lyk dis poem tho as I tld u b4, I think one ov da elements I rly lyk about it is the flow and rhythm maintained throughout, its so flawless that it seems lyk it is one contnuous poem> I know that sounds weird but I mean that the stanzas unlike in other poems don't effectt the rhythm as teh flow is continuous from one to the next is the best way I can describe it, even though its a crap explanation for what i really mean.

Love you lots and lots and lots,
Bethan XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxxX

The wording and rhythmn in this poem was excellent.. A very enjoyable read 5/5 xx

Wow again an amazing poem!
sorry i havent had time to read them all,
im currently using the school computers untill after christmas,
thanks 4 ur comments, u guys have made me feel really welcomed to this web, (check my profile again)Oh by the way, i really am 14 but its my b-day january 4th so im 15 soon 2 b!!!