Life for death, and death for life ...
Forth and back, back and forth

(( I loved how you did these lines.. Amazing.))

I loved this poem.. Absolutely loved it. It was strong and told an excellent moral.. I really liked it. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex5.5

Wowee-- out of all your poems, I liked this one the most. It was great. I would change a thing. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Hey amazing poem! your really talented! cant wait to se more of your poems!
love mel

"Life for death, and death for life our soles will pay."
[Soul] Sole is like the bottom of your shoe.

This was a good poem, there was some good imagery in it. Cool stuff.