Again I thought these were lyrics, I have no idea if they are or not, but they'd go really well as a song.

I really liked this one though, Speshly the start of it, about drinking to solve your problems and everything. Great job!

Natalie``

Hey
awsum poem, i really enjoed reading this, well done!
love mel

Well I can relate to this alot. my friends seem to think I have a 'drinking problem' but psssh. i just love alcohol lol. this poem reminded me of myself alot. 5/5

I like it a lot! nicely done

This is really good

Its a good poem and it usually takes me more than 6 beers to get all messed up and forget every thing that happened that night lol...