Wow. Such a powerful poem, and so strong. I think you expressed in it very well and you had some good rhymes in there too. Good Job.

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This is well good, the way the begining and the end are the opisite the same words but completly different meaning, well composed.

I can relate to this poem...it's so sad btu well written keep up the wonderful work..5/5 for you
auna