I liked it, very nice meanings
but u have to work on ur spelling more and try using more powerful words in ur poems and a bit of rhymes

Awww...Gabby... i really liked it! that was good....spelling could be better! but it was still good! *gives you 5 stars* =P! love ya always
~Amber Dawn~

Oh btw...
the PEANUT to my BUTTER ,
your the STAR to my BURST,
your the M to my M,
your the POP to my TART,
your the MILKY to my WAY,
your the FRUIT to my LOOP,
your the MILK to my DUDS,
your the LUCKY to my CHARMS,
your the ICE to my CREAM,
your the GHETTO to my BOOTY,
but mostly....
your the BEST to my FRIEND!