Awwwww! that was so sweet, almost made me cry!

Omg! how awfuly sad! I'll be sure to keep her in my thoughts as well as little Ryan...God Bless You All and please let me know what happens!

MandiexOx

I'm not really, Emma. I just like writing form a dark point of view because i find you can be so much more descriptive and any mistakes you make people interpret as deliberate. ^^
I love this poem, I'll say it again. It's gorgeous.
:)

Tamin

Very nicely written poem

Nice to hear that your sister is improving, I'll be praying.

Since this was written a couple of months ago, I hope everything turned out for the best. I love to read genuine emotion as yours was. Good job on the poem.

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WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! And can I say WOW about a thousand more time!!!! That is just incredible! Even the introduction was beautiful about the baby replacing her life. That is just ... (*sigh*), I'm speechless! Great job. 1,000,000/ 1,000,000 heehee ok so definately 5/5 lol. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Beautiful.
Im sorry to hear about
your sister.
I hope everything works out.
Becautiful poem by the way,
gave me chills.

Amberinaa*
xoxo.

Great poems it's so sad i'm glad to hear your sister is getting better. i have 2 sisters and i would HATE if anything happened to them ....... even tough it's beenmonths since you've written this i will keep your family in my thoughts, best wishes

I love it. very well written and i hope everything goes good

-Jamie

Very good poem! i hope everything goes well with your family, mostly ur sister obviously but also everyone else.

Good luck!

Sad and touching. I hope it went well.