Great poem! thanks for the comment on mine, i like how it flows, i give it a 5/5 all the way!
~*~Amber~*~

You have such a passion of words.

Great concept! Never stumbled across something like that by now. Very good!

Hey that was really awesome... i love it when people use weather to describe emotion. and thx for the comments on mine.

It flows really nice! 5/5

I love this poem, it flows great, 5/5!!!

This carries an excellent flow. The words are meaningful and rich, giving the verses an extravagent air.

Very well thought out, deep. A pleasing read.
5/5

I really like this poem. It is something anyone can relate to. I like how you related the emotion to a thunderstorm. Nice job!

Comment #7:

I think this is one of my favorites from you, Charisma. I mean it's just a classic piece. And I think it's timeless, no matter how many times I read it I still love it. All the phrases and the flow and the emotion, all perfect!
~Midnight Sun

I like this one. It was a little different from what I usually read from you, which is probably a good reason on why I love it..shows off your talent as a writer that much more. Great job.

5.5
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Sorry, love, but I just didn't like this piece very much. The rhymes were mostly okay, and the structure was good, but I just didn't really like the words and what was being said.

Brad

I didn't really like the last two stanzas, buut the first two I really did like. I loved the angle you wrote this piece from. I can't pick a favorite stanza, but its definitely out of the first two.

Brad