One of the best sonnet's I've ever read. The torment and romance is absolutely breathtaking. I loved each and every line....Holly

I thought this poem was beautiful. One of the best sonnets I've read, it was romantic and heart-wrenching. Absolutely fantastic.

and thanks for your comment :).

Beautifully depicted Luanne and such use of beautiful vocabulary as well each line flowed perfectly to the next in a cascade of imagery with the deepest emotion behind it - really enjoyed this piece my darlin your writing just keeps on getting better!

Beautifully done my friend. A passionate, brilliant poem.

That was so pretty! i love it..you write soo well. xoxo