Wow i love it! even though it dosent have alot of words, it is very descriptive. exellent work! keep it up!
XOXOXO
Kamille
P.S. come check out some of my poems i think youll like them! 5/5

You have talent! check some of my poems. youll luv em!

Paints a picture in my mind. very good. I loved it.:D
Bravo!

5/5
Amberinaa*