Nice flow, in most parts. In some, it's not too bad, but could be improved upon. I did think the vocab was astounding though! Excellent choice in words. Great write. I enjoye reading it. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wonderfully written amazaing

The perfect performer on the stage
The one who never seems to rage
His poise and stance remain at ease
Yet inside he pays the hated fees

^^ Amazing part. A lovely job with this one. :]

Nice vocab
although some of your other poems
were stronger then this one
which meands youve proabably grown
good job