Hey superman, thanks for your comment, it's really great to know someone appreciates what I write. And I wanted to tell you that I think this poem is touching and very beautiful! keep writing!

This is good...and i like it but i felt like there could have been a little more added...like "maybe before my one, and only true love" you could have added a little something like b/c no one takes my breath away like you or bla bla...idk but yea its still good..4/5

Hey Superman,
I thought this poem was awesome, being a girl I know what girls like and for a guy to feel that way for a woman is awesome. Great write.