Comments : Impact at the bus stop

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sar, this was a really different poem from the usuals I read on PnQ....I had to think about it first (which is always good when poets stir up that in the readers mind), I liked it!! I didn't like the last part though girl because you never know who you can impact with just a smile or just a glance, just a simple hand gesture. Very interesting topic and I enjoyed the read!
    Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Well you certainly made an impact with this piece!! What makes you think you made no impact?! We all have an impact on every day. The fact that these things were noticed, means you made an impact upon life. I like the way you've captured the UK bus stop scenery... Beautifully done! I very much enjoyed this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    I really like the uniqueness and power of this poem... Nice piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Hey no one noticed my repeated word!
    "And and"
    Lol :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was really good! I love the humility you show...and it's kinda ironic cause I'm sure the people you were writing about were sure they didn't make any impression either.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Deep poem, I must say. Honestly, I've never even thought of this before, but it must be true. Yet, it's hard not to think of Sarah White and think of the impact she's made on this site. i lvoe your poetry.

    Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww wow thats cool i like it xxx