Holy Crap. Darien. I loved this poem. I didn't know half of this stuff. haha. Well, I knew it at one point but, I don't now Lol. This poem. I felt like i was in history class. You are a great teacher lol you should go to school to be a History teacher. hehe. but i loved this alot. and you are great and sweet and kind and cute and oh boy i could go on forever. amazing job babe! 5/5

Austria raised a man so vile and vicious
wow that was the first hitler poem i have read that i actually enjoyed. I love how you always have such powerfull words in ur poems! Keep it up!!!

Great job with this poem although i love all ur poems 5/5 from me keep it up

Your knowledge of history blends so well with your poetry. This is an exceptional poem which educates and thrills. The facts and the rhymes are superb!

Ok you know what, I never thought I'd enjoy this poem, but I knew you wanted feedback so me being a nice friend *bats eyelashes* I would read!

I enjoyed this though..I think people should write more poems like these in a sense where the readers learn something..perhaps if all History books were in poetry form, students would learn better..at least I would!! Everything I've had questions on are kinda cleared up now!
This reminds me of that challenge I had! You did awesome with this Darien!
Chell

Very powerful job, it could almost be a life/society poem. Great use of words, you must have done research for this poem.

O.O Words...word I don't know the meaning of lol.

GREAT vocab selection! I didn't even understand most of the words in some parts. >.< The rhymes were quite unique, which is a good thing lol. The flow was excellent...Not much to say for improvement. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hey amazing poem!
its so sad what that barsted do to all those innocent people!
great joB
love mel

Wow Darien.. How can you have anything but a perfect 5.0 rating on that? It was amazingg! Your rhymes were all perfect and helped it to flow effortlessly.. And the facts that went into this also made it much more interesting to read.. Lol, they should make history books in poetry, more people would read it.. Anyway, wonderfully done! xx 5/5

To me, the flow seemed a bit shaky in some parts, but you had your facts straight and your word choice was so good. It was like a history lesson that I actually didn't get bored reading. I loved how you wrote out from the start of the war to the ending of it and the specific names I didn't know.

Very interesting topic for a poem - especially this day in age, when it's no longer new news and there are bigger "enemies" that we worry about today. I think the flow/rhymes were a bit shaky in parts but it made up for it in shock value and just general interest in the topic. (Even if I knew it) Most of us aren't taught much about Hitler's actual rise to power, just that he was an evil man that killed all those Jews. It's nice to see the breakdown written somewhere to educate more people.

Once again my friend, your passion and talent shine. You have grown as a writer and with each new poem I am newly impressed.

Haha! Thank you history teacher! (I actually understood that)

Now, I'll be honest. I disliked it, because even though I like learning about the Holocaust, I just hate history period. But I won't judge you on that.
The flow was amazing and so was the discriptiveness. You did wonderfully on this. Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Omg Darien. You ever thought about being a history teacher? Lmao! God, this poem really makes up for all those times I never went to history class. HAHA! Ohhhh. It was great!

I loved the flow in this, and it was such a great topic to write about aswel, you wrote it beautifuly aswell. Tehe.

Wonderful write SMAWCE brother. Top stuff ;) Lol.. now I'm just gonna sit back and wait for that poem you were gonna write for me..lol..

Natalie``

Awesome work here, Darien! The flow was perfect and wow what a message. Amazing piece!

Great historical poem,
you are great 5/5

Very intelligent, extremely well worded and thought out. I would change V-Day to VE-Day (Victory in Europe) as you are recounting the european saga of WWII. Other than that I think it is almost flawless.

I liked the form, the style and approach. Tidy, neat and not too over zealous, as these subject can often become.

I would be interested to see if you could do similar justice to the night of long knives (Rhoen) or the Battle of Britain.

High praise is warranted. A contender for poem of the month for sure.

Bret

I really like this one...it has a unique way with its words...well once again, 5-5

Intriguing... smart...

you seem to have chains from the past that your mind seem to hold even in this dispensation.Smartly done.

Well, honestly I can't say this poem moves me, lol, but you did a good job putting facts into poetry form. And you got it to rhyme. Nice.