Comments : Heat Stroke (Edited)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I like how you describe the incident very vividly. The words you use are very descriptive! Keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very good.....very effective...I can see it all....