I like this poem a lot.
Great choice of words!
excellent, keep it up.
5/5

*check out my poems in return, thanx*

I also liked this poem it made me wanna know more or somein lol i cant think of a word just good job i loved it keep it up 5/5

I love the symbolism in this poem, it made it easier to comprehend exactly what you meant.

Both life and the ocean are just to big to fully grasp in the short years we are given to live... it's enough to drive you crazy.

I may be totally of, but that's what I got from it, and I feel that way all the time.

No matter what you meant, I love it anyways, though. I'd like to read more by you.

~Scarlett~

The poem right there has depth. It is a good detail of an ocean of what is has.

I love this poem.. there is this whole different meaning behind it, like, there is so much that we don't know and that we would like to know, but can't, because we are out of time. Great job. Flow and word choice was excellent. 5/5 for sure

It was awesometastical, lol

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Youre really good at this mysterious thing. god. i read this and i got like a million questions goin thru my head.. grreat job. <3 5/5 again