Oo lala...this poem was sad. Like one of those tragic love poems. You had a couple nice rhymes too. And I hope it's not true and if it is...i hope you get over that person soon.

Hey if you could, I would really appreciate it if you commented on my poems. Take Care

Awh.. That was really sad.. The flow was a little off as the lines were different lenghts.. Other than that, the descriptions were beautiful and the emotion clear.. Nice job 4/5

I like this poem alot ... and i just wrote the poem today ....during class... i and yeah it did happen to me and but the way you really good at writing poems

brad