Words of advice...

EVERY SWEET GUY WANTS A SWEET GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

why dont girls understand? A girl that say hey loser should expect a hey beautiful why dont we go on a date sometime? or something its bull lol sweet guys who can show emotion need to me shown emotion themselves or they will feel horrible...the end jeez i hate girls who think they can disrespect guys and get a perfect guy in return i just hate it.

Great poem. I loved the plot. The rhyming was excellent as well as the flow. I really got lured into this poem and understood it 100%.[[Keep it up]]]

&& I'm so glad you started writing your quotes again, they'e always amazing.

Omg lauren...is this another heart break?
i wish i could help...
if it is, then its bad..
it it isnt, then its worse...it would mean you still havnt come to terms with the last one.

any way, i hope you find your way out..
I'm here for you...

try and add me:
dhaval_shah1@hotmail.com

its been a long time since we spoke. i was just going thru my comments and i read a convo of ours...and felt really bad that we stopped talking because of my ExAMS! So I wanna talk again! Add me!

Love you!
Dhaval

This was rather delightful to read. It has a wonderful diction and plot. The theme was also organized and progressed quite well. When I reread it, it still held the same effect to me the first time a read it--simply endearing and lovely. =] I'm looking forward to read more of your work.
Regards, Marian

I thought this poem made perfect sense..it was beautifully written..nice job!=]