Awe! Kaylee! This was so good. I loved this, seriously. It's so different to most nature poems, and you described everything so well. Your flow was flawless aswell. A great job!! And you are good at writing happy poems, too. =P Tehe. 5/5
This has a very sombre feel to it in my opinion. As if nature is crying and somewhat depressed. I liked the imagery very much, it was well described. Honestly, I think shattered and heartbeats portray a slightly cliche idea, maybe it could me described better.
Thanks for sharing!!