Great use of vivid and descriptive words, and your expressions were good like, "the sand remembered each of our steps" and how God would spare you two, really good emphasis of a deep love.

Hey jules,
first of i would like to thank you alot for all your comments about my work, they make me feel good on the inside. second i love all your poems but this one is my favourite, good work!

superman

This poem is soo beautiful!!!
i love the imagery (and usually i dont go for that stuff)
5/5
Thank you so much for your comment!
..xx

Woah:P Yeah, they are really alike:P
How funny:) Excellent poem;) I'd vote, but my computer is, well, lets call it strange:)

The Angel of Secrets