Sounds like a rap, but hey it still has all the elements of a poem so 5/5 babe keep up the good work

it's a good poem, your able to show clearly what the person is feeling, it just needs to be looked over agian to make it even better
5/5 though

aww good poem...im sorry you feel this way if you do lol anwyays i can totally relate very well said...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

this one doesn't quite flow right. but it's still good.
crystal

I agree it needs work but what poem doesn`t I must rewrite mine all the time...You captured emotions very well, and what some ppl maybe feeling