Great Job! I totally love it! keep up the good work!

Aw, I really loved reading that. Very special piece of work. :)

Heey! that's beautiful! Although you keep repeating I once, it doesn't get annoying or something, so that's just fantastic! I really love it! keep it up ;)

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I love this poem! I would, however, had enjoyed it more if you continued the rhyming down to the third stanza, but still, it had a strong meaning!

Great Job!I really loved reading that! that was a fantastic poem...5/5....but look at some of my poems and tell me what you think
-brandon-