Comments : Beauty with a twist

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Amazing poem. my favorit part is:
    Her pen is her freedom
    Her blood is her ink
    But she had to stop writing
    When she was to fat to think

    it's so small but very, very strong. i love the poem. it's amazing how such little words can be so strong. keep writing:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Wonderful deep words. I think the third stanza was the best, but the others we're also excellent. The rhyming in this poem was good and the flow was also. Take Care!

    --Shannon*

  • 17 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    I loved it.. I was going through anerixia once.. i am not anymore cuz i tried help but every now and then i find myself not eating.. i can relate to this poem.. i really love it

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by silent eyes

    Wow what a good poem (it is kind of sad i now what its like, the fat part) keep writing ~silent eyes~

  • 17 years ago

    by silent eyes

    P.S people still comment

  • Wow great poem, 5/5 loved it... keep up the work

  • 17 years ago

    by RicaLo

    I liked your use of metaphors in this poem. It made it come alive. Read some of my poems. Some of them are a bit old, though. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Amazing poem, I loved it, its so sad though......keep writing! 5/5