Loved it. ^^ 5/5 comment on mine sometime- meg

LOVED THIS POEM!!THANXS FOR COMMENTIN MINE!!WELL KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK!!

ALWAYS FLORY

This poems realy good this poem reminds me of my life basically all u wroteabout happened to me but see my man when i wouldnt unlock the door and when i was so close to death demolished my door to save my life

sry but yea i love ur work keep it up and ull go far

This an excelent poem...I would point something out about it, but...you say you would rather cover these things. The minds eye can see...or at least mine can from time to time in your words.

The rhymes were really good. sad poem.. i know how that feels.. written stuff like this before. good job

This is an awesome poem, and thanks for the comment on my other poem