Hey there :) I havn't seen u in ages! This was so deep man I thought I was going 2 cry! I loved how you started off each stanza with a question. It realy drew ur reader in :) it doesn't always work but for this poem it did! so, well written! Keep it up!

luv ya ruthie xoxo

That was good...never personally felt like this but then again I also wrote one kind of sort of like this..lol..haven't read one of yours in awhile...I like it..very emotional...

Beautiful it was great it reminds me of a new one I wrote called Your Game but with spme very key diffrences but I can understand the feeling in all to well

Nice....i can feel the pain that was in this and understand it....nice job...

matt