Really good poem! 5/5

Sinking their fangs into fresh flesh and be done with their prey,
((..fresh flesh being done... Maybe? I don't know I just don't like this line..))

I really liked this poem. There's nothing I can much say about it, as I rather wrote a novel for my last comment, but I just really enjoyed it. You're an amazing writer and all your poems are just perfect the way they are.. I really liked how this one didn't seem to have a rhyme scheme to it, yet somethings rhymed. Nicely done. Perfect for the poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5