To tell you the truth i'm not much of a fan of cutting poems and razors, but i will say that i think you did a good job with it. it had a wonderful flow to it and you presented this topic in a way that i didn't mind reading it. well done!

~Jacklyn

Though the whole "cutting" poetry is so played out on this site, I enjoyed this. Especially these lines:

"Crimson wine falls from your edge
Silent Steel, to you I pledge"

"The crimson wine drips in the sink
Pure porcelain, who needs a drink"

Well done! Keep it up...Love ya~Holly