Comments : Whats in it for me?

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Really good Poem mate!, Outstanding! your backround is picture perfect, i love it, continue on Mate!!
    ~jose~

  • 17 years ago

    by jessel jane

    "Love,
    Something I’ve never been through
    Purity,
    Something we’ve both committed too">>> wonderful

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    What’s in it for me?
    More than I can imagine….
    More than I deserve…
    ^^
    What ??? Shake yourself girl.....
    You deserve the best of everything my girl.

    Stars
    that will dance in the eyes
    of your true love
    birds
    that will sing his love from
    the trees far above

    You deserve all the happiness in the world my girl ! And someday you will receive all that you deserve !

    Love , happiness, kisses, cuddles and much, much more .

    Love ya A.I.D !

  • 17 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    I loved this poem. It was so beautiful written, and with such innocence that I am in awe of how you must have been feeling when you wrote this. I wish more teenagers had the values that you truly portrait in your poetry. Great job. Keep it up :)