The title of this poem caught my eye. The poem had a good plot and I got lured into it since the first line. The words were very deep and strong which is good and the poem rhyming was errorless for the most part and the flow was also flawless. ((5/5))

If you would..could you comment on my poems, one would be fine..i know you arn't the commenting type so I'm just asking kindly. You don't have to, but it would be nice and I would appreciate it, I understand if you don't comment though...well take care.