Comments : Can you pretend for this moment?

  • 17 years ago

    by mandy

    I liked what you had to say, you said what i wish i could express.....

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    I completely relate to this. i have this friend who I've been friends with since grd 6, she's my best friend and i care about her more than anyone in the world, kind of like you're relationship with this person i'd guess.

    I really loved this poem, except for one stanza the rhythm in it is perfect as well as the rhyming in it. excellent job.