Another great poem here, keep it up. you have a good talent and you can be a great poet if you continue your great job.
keep it up
5/5

Another beautiful poem. You'll get past this guy, you'll find someone who loves you and only you, I know it. Keep up the writing.

U know you should read some of my poems.. kuz lots u can relate too.. i really liked this one.. fantasy world.. we all live in it

I read all your peoms and... i kinda think it could use some rythem...but i like the words

I really liked this poem of yours. It's something that I, too, can relate to. Good Job!

Wow! this was really great! ur talented! how old r u anyway? i'm 12 and i'm kinda bad at writing stuff but yeah w/e but ur awesome! rate and comment!
laCey//**