I've never read anything like this before. It's very effective, rather shocking. It makes a firm point. 5/5

Thanks for your comments.

Jemma

This poem gave me the chills. It had an eerie flow to it. Its a strong poem, very well written.

I like it...

I loved this, I thought it was excellently written.
The word choice was beautiful and the imagery was breathtaking.
You did a wonderful job with this.

Wow, this poem kind of gave me the chills. It's such a good poem. There's absolutely nothing wrong with this one. It had so much feeling in the words you wrote this poem with. Very good job. 5/5

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