It's really cool how you actually kept up the rhyme, I wasn't sure you'd be able to do it but you did it well. lol Like you said this is obviously a very heartfelt poem. Becky's very lucky, lol.

Ammazing...wow. I can't get enoigh your work is so wonderful...alwasy fresh and always new styles....great jobb once again.

lissa

U fuxking cut urself, i kill u. end of story. u have ur little alcohol stories, and i can tell u right here and now if u start that s hit i kill u.
neways, what happened with becky?
tell meh!. lol. but this is rlly good, and i do wanna hear all abouts it. if im not on aim when u are or something, feel free to message me on myspace.

That is some very strong emotiotions. But it made me cry bc I know some one who shot himself in the head, and that is what it reminds me of, because he did it because of the loss of a relationship. I like your rhyme in this poem especially tho. As a whole your poems are definately the ones that get me thinking apart from the others I have read. and thats a good thing

That is some very strong emotiotions. But it made me cry bc I know some one who shot himself in the head, and that is what it reminds me of, because he did it because of the loss of a relationship. I like your rhyme in this poem especially tho. As a whole your poems are definately the ones that get me thinking apart from the others I have read. and thats a good thing