That poem was relli good, Your a great writter! 5/5

I like the contrast between the first word and the last... i don't know if the form requires that it be like that, or if that's just you, but either way i thought it was cool

That was good to learn that, thax for commenting bye.

Bravo, on even doing one of these. I have tried and failed miserably. I tip my hat to you. The words flowed so well together. Loved it.

Jeannie

Hello tim, this was creative poem you penned here, simply beautiful... though i know i never know about this form....only read them and try to understand behind the meaning...anyway, keep writing.. have a great weekend, take care... bert ~

What an amazing form Timothy !
I was mesmerized and captured by your words.
I curse this site for one and only one reason and that being it has no centering feature. But you pulled that off regardless with greatness.

Thank-you for sharing this amazing form and poem, I am eager to try doing one the same. Though I fear it will be awhile before I can produce anything that comes even close to your masterpiece.
Thank you also for commenting on my Tyburn and yes, they do look much easier to write than they actually are.

Take care, dear poet
Luanne

This looks to me to be very hard but you did an excellent job,it is very appealing to the eye.