I like your style of writing it is beautiful.

This is a another sad poem!
yet you penned it so well!

keep it up!

Wonderful, I can see your emotions conveyed accuratly and was enlightened by your wording.
Good job.
Ash

It alright y so much pain

Ehh this wasnt all that good cause you didnt say what you are doing. i think its about cutting? but im not sure. i think you can add more to it and it will make it better, but other then that it is a good poem and very sad too 5/5

Wow i can totally relate to this poem. I know the pain you speak of and i like how you explained it. 5/5